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R. M. Greta's avatar

Every part of this was so artistic and necessary! I love the gritty world you've built, especially the ship. I love a good amount of violence as well - not too much, just enough. Excellent work!

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Spencer D.W.'s avatar

I'm a sucker for biological tech. it is so sick. So of course love the setting here. Critisms I have would be that the intro detailing the ship probably isn't needed. at least to me, I love learning shit as I read especially ideas as cool as this. and I think not having that could of helped with my other critism which is once we are on "ground level" with the characters the setting takes kind of a back seat. which it should to the main characters and action, but those moments interlaced with description of this biological ship I think would of gone a long way.

Like I said, love biological tech would love to check out more.

keep on keeping on homie!

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