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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

GAWD DAMN. 🗣️ 🔥

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Tom Schecter's avatar

Gorgeous

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Pablo Báez's avatar

This one gave me feels.

Her poetry’s beautiful, had to channel this

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Oh, Pablo. This made me teary in the best way. I feel like I’ve been seen, mined and a jewel has somehow been carved from the pressures that made me.

So, so beautiful.

I don’t know what to utter next

betwixt, between

belied

believed

revealed

unseen

(un)see(m)ingly revealed.

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Pablo Báez's avatar

I loved your poetry, and I tried to give back.

I'm happy it touched you as it did me.

There's about five words picked from three of your poems, those where the spiritual bones of the poem, so you can say in a way you're in it (plus whose presence in spirit is there). Hope you have a great rest of your day and thanks for your help!

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Thank you so very much! I’m so pleased you enjoyed my poetry. Fingers crossed everything improves for you soon.

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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

This is Zivah, my god, how'd you do that?! This is fire

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

S’magic, right?! ✨

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Kolya Reshetov's avatar

love this, man!

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Pablo Báez's avatar

thanks kolya!

this one was personalized for another poet, Zyvah!

glad you loved it.

should have at least another one coming out soon.

thanks for looking out!

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