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✧ brooklyn 𓆏's avatar

pablo this is cinema!!

every scene move n thought is choreographed. n i can’t get over how u write chaos. ur violence reads like a ballet. i could see everything. n i was holding my BREATH omg

and again!! the soundtrack!! i love it bc that’s how i read / write. i have playlists for all my fav books. when i write i have to have the perfect playlist on. but u use it in such a sharp intentional gorgeous way. it changes the tone. it’s abrupt. it shapes the story.

and that canal scene :((( that broke me. the way u gave em this tiny moment of quiet after all the noise. time slowed :((

just wow pablo!! so devastating. so human.

okay onto next

(ps i also love starburters so im taking those compliments tyyy)

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Devo/Murphy Carpenter's avatar

Wow this is a book

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