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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Wow, this was intense! The word choice, particularly that line early on involving teeth and hard candy, was brutal! I had spotify open to switch tracks as I read, and it really added to the already excellent atmosphere!

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Emil Ottoman's avatar

Good start, good movement, some confusion in sequence of action in places, some great moments.

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