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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

This is fantastic! I'm spiraling.

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Dylan Bosworth's avatar

Awesome.

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Pablo Báez's avatar

Thanks for being there, bro.

👊🏽

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Lyndsey Resnick's avatar

Candyfloss roulette inside the carrousel. You got me, Pablo. Thank you.

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Pablo Báez's avatar

Lyndsey, idk if it's because of how I'm feeling, or what I read of yours before getting into the headspace for this piece, but this one was particularly difficult.

I'm glad you liked, I hope it stays with you.

Thanks for your help and support!

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Lyndsey Resnick's avatar

I have a shotgun approach to stories, so I hoped it wasn’t too difficult. Imagine my surprise when it was a carnival poem with an earthy air. One of my favorite things in the world is that chaos. Seriously. You somehow got that. Thanks for your time and energy. I love this.

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

I love this so much. There’s some dark delights in here that make me want to sink my teeth into Haribo Tangfastics until the sugar makes my teeth ache.

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Lyndsey Resnick's avatar

I agree. It’s such a fantastic trip. Candy floss and carousels and the hidden decay. He definitely finds the marrow.

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

He finds it and licks the bones clean. I want to ride this carousel!

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