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excusemyfrench's avatar

paul, your poetry always feels like as if im listening some jack stauber song

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Pablo Báez's avatar

ngl, i haven't listened to the guy, but i'll trust your taste and hope that's a good thing.

thanks for lookin' out! i'mma try to keep 'em comin'

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excusemyfrench's avatar

paul, your poetry always feels like as if im listening some jack stauber song

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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

Fuck. This one’s devastating. That last stanza is has me in ruins

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Pablo Báez's avatar

yeah, this one took a different turn, but had to get it out

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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

I imagine. You've been under great stress and fighting for your life. I wish I could help you more.

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JLG Noga's avatar

Any piece that uses the smiling emoji in a menacing context gets a kudos and shout out from me. Let him cook!

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Will Boucher's avatar

Yes yes yes…devastating use of emojis

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