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Stefan Baciu's avatar

This is nightlife as spiritual warfare, Renaissance painting meets trap-house mythos...the rhythm of your prose—staccato, breathless, breathy—is as important as the narrative itself. It feels like something that wants to be read aloud, gasped rather than spoken.

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✧ brooklyn 𓆏's avatar

pablo!!! this is my fav piece of urs ever. this flooded all my senses. like genuinely. i appreciate the soundtrack it totally changed the piece. ur writing became literal motion. a little disorienting and hazy i LOVED it. like i was inside the club.

also i’m obsessed with ur mosaic of perspectives. the way you move between them is insane!! the story feels woven and larger than life and intimate it makes no sense but like i’m There?!

everything is sweaty n exposed n dripping and i love how u find poetry in the vulgarity.

every interaction in this is transactional and i think that says soo much in itself. sex power danger love. all currency in the club / cathedral. it’s hot it’s human. kind of really sad actually at the end too.

anyways u built something that overwhelms and seduces and horrifies. i love love love this piece !! done rambling!! thank u for coming to my ted talk on Your writing btw!! going to next ! need more !!

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